This week's celebration of writing comes from Alexandra in 1W. Alexandra has written a very creative and entertaining story. Read it below!
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She has included a blurb that leaves the reader wanting to read her story |
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Once upon a time there were two twins. Their names were Olivia and Ben. They were friends. |
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On Tuesday they were at the park. It was so fun! They were flying everywhere. |
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On Wednesday they had a big fight. They lost their mum and dad. They lost their family. It was just them two. Then a mean Eagle came and ate Ben. When Olivia was 90 years old she lost her wings. Then her whole family came. |
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Their family was so sad. They had no smiles on their face. They never went anywhere. So they were very lonely. |
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She has also included a glossary of some technical or tricky words that are in her writing. |
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